02 February 2009

cold sunlight

the grey concrete glints in the late afternoon sun
resisting her burning attempts to excite warmth
in his cold, cement heart accustomed to rain

immobile, he stares fixedly onward

as she dances with all her winter might

impervious to her charms he waits

his heart belongs to another

sadly she dips at last below the horizon

he, relaxing his strength, welcoming

as frost steals softly into his lap

coating his gruff exterior with a sheen

until the morning comes and sun sees

the truth sparkling on his constant face

2 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem. I really like it.

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  2. Mm. That was incredible to read. I love how you describe the sun and the concrete as objects which can have feeling. :) Makes me think about them differently.

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