16 March 2009

curiosity

round a corner
down a trail
finding secrets
hidden info
pouncing on facts
stalking knowledge
the tasty meal
a mousy treat
my prey and I
our delicate dance
all seems well
until
it's gone too far
8 down, 1 to go

3 comments:

  1. I love this. It is excellent and I really like the metaphors involved.

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  2. Hehe. I like the play on metaphors and "Curiosity killed the cat" and "cats have 9 lives" It's quite compelling. Especially since you left it sort of subtle.

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